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    Posted: 12 October 2008 at 11:17am
Im applying for a job for the first time in like 4 years- havent worked for almost 2 1/2 years.

What should I include in the cover letter? How much personal details do u go into? The ad says the job would suit a person with a young family wanting to return to nursing, so should I mention Isla's age etc or is that too much?
It says the person will need to work ocassional weekend days and cover staff holidays, and Im fine with that, should I write that too?

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Yep I reckon you should write Isla's age and that you're happy to work the occasional weekend.... especially cos they mentioned it in the ad.

Good luck!
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Cool thanks.

What else is usually in a cover letter? My mind is blank?

There is no contact person, so do I just write To whom is may concern?? Then what??!!
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I pretty much say:
Dear *name is best, but otherwise to whom it may concern is fine*
I'm writing to apply for the position of ...
I make sure I say why I would be great for the role (as in you are a fab nurse etc)
Then I say why I want the job - here is where I'd say about Isla, and working weekends etc.

Good luck with the job
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I ususally write dear sir/madam when I don't know who it is to, and then sign yours faithfully.

Just put that you are writing in regard to the ad for *position*, you think it would suit you ideally as you have the relevant skills (maybe name some) and are looking to return to the work force after being a SAHM to your daughter. That you are able and willing to do some weekend work and then tell them you have enclosed your cv for them to look at.

Don't write too much, literally just an introductory paragraph as you don't want to re-write what is in your cv and that is the really important bit.

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yep, Id put to whom it may concern or dear sir madam

The guts of your letter should mention what job your applying for, why the employer should select you & how they can follow up with interview

a link to some cover letter samples that may give you ideas Here

All the best Kellz

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Hmm it's a bit different but here's what I wrote for my covering letter applying for a teaching job a couple of years ago...

My address
Wherever
AUCKLAND


18 October 2006


Their address
Wherever
AUCKLAND


To Whom It May Concern;

I am writing in regard to the teaching positions available at [the school name] for next year. I am an enthusiastic, innovative and caring Beginning Teacher who is passionate about working with the Year 7/8 age group.

I have curriculum strengths in ICT, English and Social Studies – and where possible integrate these together in planning and teaching. I am proficient in using both PC and Apple computers, with extensive experience using iMovie, MovieMaker, Word and PowerPoint. As technology is constantly changing, I flourish in continual learning in this area and highly value the integration of ICT in the classroom. I have knowledge and understanding of how to plan for inquiry based learning, and would value the opportunity to implement this in the classroom.

My core beliefs strongly align with that of [the name of the school]. I believe it is vital for students to strive to reach their full potential, and to celebrate various successes together. I also recognise the vast importance of values, which you highlight through the family community and positive learning environment that is [the name of the school]. I enjoy working as part of a team and value the different perspectives that come from this.


Attached is my CV. I look forward to hearing from you.


Yours sincerely,



My full name




Man just reading it through it sounds dumb!! But you get the idea lol. And I got an interview and the job so it must have been ok. One thing I do do is write something referring to that workplace. Like this school I wrote about values cos from looking at the website, that was important to that school. Another covering letter had something about cultural diversity cos that was a big part of that school. I made them personal and showed that I'd kinda done a bit of research about the workplace.
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When you write your cover letter it should focus on your strengths, skills and qualifications. It should also identify key points or words that the employer is looking for from the ad. With your personal info I would mention it becuase the ad is welcoming parents but only briefly. This is a sample that I give to my candidates:

Important key points to keep in mind:
· Clean white A4 paper
· Black or blue ink
· Typewritten unless handwritten is specifically requested
· Justify – No indenting of first line of paragraph
· No Commas between address details
· Arial, Tahoma, Verdana Fonts Only
· Size 12 Font



Your street address
Suburb STATE Postcode
(2 lines blank)

Date
(2 lines blank)

Company Name
Street Sddress
Suburb STATE Postcode
(2 lines blank)

Dear, their name if available, otherwise use, To Whom It May Concern,

RE: Job reference number ONLY if applicable

First paragraph should identify which job you are applying for, where you found the ad and when the ad was published if available. Start your letter by saying: I wish to apply for…………… There is no need to say "I am writing to......".


Second paragraph should promote any relevant skills and experience you have, or, if you have no experience in this type of role, your enthusiasm to enter a new industry and gain experience/new skills, or any personal attributes you have which may make you particularly suitable for the position.

Third paragraph should address specific selection criteria, if necessary:
· Qualifications such as industry licences or certificates
· Availability for specific shifts – only if job mentions shift work
· Use bullet points layout as its easier for the reader and stands out

Fourth paragraph should thank the person for reading your application, suggest that you are available for an interview and state that your resume is enclosed/attached.

Yours sincerely
(5 lines blank)

Your Signature

Your Name Printed
Your Phone Number


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Post Options Post Options   Thanks (0) Thanks(0)   Quote mummyofprinces Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 12 October 2008 at 4:09pm
Yup what Rianna said. When you are applying for a role that will have high interest the cover letter should stand out. The recruiters/managers are reading loads and you want to be remembered.

I think it also pays to mention why you want to work for them over any other company and why you want this job. Be enthusiastic as your CV wont show this.

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If you go to this website www.careers.govt.nz/cv_cover_letter_templates.htm it has templates that you can use. really helpful website with C.V formats as well,That you can use.

having just been through this process covering letters are really important as everyone has said!
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That's a great covering letter rianna wish i had used it.!!
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Thanks everyone!

That template is great and really easy to understand! Thanks Rianna08.
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Your welcome Good luck. Let us know how you get on.
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YAY Kelly!!! good luck with the interview!! sound like a great job for you!!
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It always is a better idea to specify the details that explicitly have been asked by the person/ organization. I would recommend adding those details and being transparent.If you're not sure then getting some advice from somecv writing organizations could be a good idea.

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